Saturday, January 30, 2021

very rough story board

 Today I and my group had a discussion about the ideas we had for how we wanted the opening title sequence to look, we discussed how we wanted to present these ideas, I suggested that we all go off separately and visualize how we want the opening title sequence to look like, this way we could take ideas from each other's visualizations and create a piece that takes a part of everybody's own visualization. My group agreed and we decided that we would present our final rough ideas to each other tomorrow. This way of approaching it I found to be beneficial as it allowed us to have three plans that we could re-visit if there was a problem with the idea we choose, this way we also got to see different ways of how we could present the horror itself. 

I personally went off and created a very rough storyboard of how I think our opening sequence should look: 



Scene 1: A 10-second establishing shot, panning from left to right of a car with the family inside arriving to Peaslake house (mental asylum). Slow creepy non-diegetic music starts playing and diegetic sound of the car driving up the driveway on the gravel can be heard. Credits begin to appear on the bottom corners of the screen.

Scene 2: A 5-second over the shoulder shot of the family walking into the house, music continues. Dialogue can be heard from the wife making a sarcastic comment about the look of the house. The camera zooms onto the children running through the house. Diegetic sound of the children giggling can be heard. Creepy non-diegetic music continues.   

Scene 3: A 5-second mid-shot of the children's side as they are running down the corridor passing all the doors. Diegetic giggling continues and non-diegetic creepy music continues. Dolly tracking shot of children as they are running.

Scene 4:A 3-second over the shoulder shot of the camera panning up over the children's heads to reveal the room number of the door they are about to enter. Giggling stops, non-diegetic creepy music continues lightly in the background. Door opens. 

Scene 5: A 5 second shot inside the room with boxes and furniture is shown. Non-diegetic music continues. A small pan from left to right of the room is shown. Credits continue to roll in a white calm font.  

Scene 6: Quick cut transition with a flash, non-diegetic music increases. 5 second shot of the asylum girl crying. Diegetic crying noise can be heard, creepy music increases in volume and door slamming can be heard diegetic sound. The camera slowly zooms into girl before, quickly zooming to the door slamming.

Scene7: A 5-second mid-shot of the children's side as they are running down the corridor passing all the doors. Diegetic giggling continues and non-diegetic creepy music continues. Dolly tracking shot of the children as they are running. Non-diegetic creepy music reduces in volume. Credits continue to roll. 

Scene 8:A 3-second over the shoulder shot of the camera panning up over the children's heads to reveal the room number of the door they are about to enter. Giggling stops, non-diegetic creepy music continues lightly in the background. Door opens. 

Scene 9: A 5 second shot inside the room with boxes and furniture is shown, in a different order to last time. Non-diegetic music continues. A small pan from left to right of the room is shown. Credits continue to roll in a white calm font.  

Scene 10: Quick cut transition with a flash, non-diegetic music increases. 5 second shot of the asylum girl in a chair that she is strapped to and doctors walking around her writing things down, diegetic sound can be heard of the girl crying and screaming, diegetic sound of the doctors walking around her and diegetic sound of the pen scribbling things down on the paper can be heard. The camera pans from left to right of the room. Before the camera quickly zooms back out of the room and the door slams on camera diegetic sound of the door slamming can be heard.

Scene 11:A 5-second mid-shot of the children's side as they are running down the corridor passing all the doors. Diegetic giggling continues and non-diegetic creepy music continues. Dolly tracking shot of the children as they are running. Non-diegetic creepy music reduces in volume. Credits continue to roll.

Scene 12:A 3-second over the shoulder shot of the camera panning up over the children's heads to reveal the room number of the door they are about to enter. Giggling stops, non-diegetic creepy music continues lightly in the background. Door opens. 

Scene 13: A 5 second shot inside the room with boxes and furniture is shown, in a different order to last time as well as a window in the back of the room. Non-diegetic music continues. A small pan from left to right of the room is shown. Credits continue to roll in a white calm font.  

Scene 14: Quick cut transition with a flash, non-diegetic music increases. 5 second shot of the asylum girl, the room is converted a yellow vintage gel is used on the lighting of the room and diegetic sound of the girl screaming outside the window can be heard as well as her hitting the window can be heard. The camera zooms in on the girl and goes over her shoulder to convert into a close-up shot of the asylum girl's face.  

Scene 15: A 3 second close-up shot of the asylum's girl's face screaming, screaming is diegetic sound, a fade transition to the girl from the family screaming in a close-up shot. 

Scene 16: A 3 second close-up shot of the girl from the family screaming at the brother because they are fighting over the toy. The camera slowly zooms out from the girl's face. Creepy non-diegetic music stops. 

Scene 17:A 5-second mid-shot of the kids can be seen of them shouting and screaming that the toy is there's. Diegetic sound of the kids arguing can be heard. 

Scene 18: A 5-second mid-shot of the children's side as they are running back up the corridor passing all the doors. Diegetic giggling can be heard. Dolly tracking shot of the children as they are running. Final Credits roll.Diegetic noise of the children running can be heard.


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